critique my common app essay

College Essays
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<p>hope someone would read my common app essay. I’m not '09 btw, would probably be applying for deferment.</p>

2

<p>what colleges are you applying to?</p>

3

<p>ill read, pm it</p>

4

<p>i’ll give you some feedback on it. pm me.</p>

5

<p>my friends, i’ll give you some “straight talk,” pm it to me</p>

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<p>carnegie mellon, stanford</p>

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<p>hi. pm me or email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href=“not%20an%2009-er”>/email</a></p>

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<p>sent everyone who requested. Waiting for your replies</p>