Critique my commonapp essays?

[Kieran0696]

<p>Would anyone be willing to read and critique my 1000 character EC elaboration and my 500 word personal statement? </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

[Kieran0696]

<p>bump? 10char</p>

[collegebound808]

<p>I will! Just PM me</p>

[ais12345]

<p>Willing to giv feedbacks if u still need help! Just pmme</p>

<p>Sent from my GT-P1000 using CC</p>

[IsratJahan]

<p>I will also IA :)</p>