Critique my essay please! I'd really appreciate it.

College Essays
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<p>I want to try to get the apps in ASAP.</p>

<p>I decided to go for a more unique approach to my essay rather than the typical “I conquered X challenge that made me what I am.” It’s quite abnormal so I’m not sure if its any good or not.</p>

<p>Would anyone like to help?</p>

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<p>Forgot to mention its only prompt 1.</p>

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<p>It might take a while but I can read it for you.</p>

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<p>I’ll help, send via PM</p>