Critique my essay please

<p>I was hoping some of you might tell if my my 2 essays are any good. One of them is how drugs, corruption, and other illegal bussiness have affected my life as a colombian. The other is about morality. Please, tell me if you wish to read them and give me feedback. Thanks!</p>

<p>Sure I would be willing. PM me and I will send you my email address. My preference is to read in MS Word attachments so I can type my suggestions easily.</p>

<p>I can read them too.</p>

<p>and e-mail through pm.</p>