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<p>A thick fog wafts amidst a dark stage. Colored strobe lights gently flicker as an </p>

<p>outline of four grown men adorning revealing leather clothes and long blonde locks of </p>

<p>hair appear. Their presence is greeted by scantily clad super model, Tawny Kitaen, as </p>

<p>she performs gymnastics atop a 1987 Jaguar. Just then a blistering guitar solo sears </p>

<p>through more than 20 stacks of amplification and melts off your face. This may sound </p>

<p>like a Whitesnake music video, but it is my vision of Utopia. Through the popular </p>

<p>media of the 1980’s I have been influenced in countless ways to become a more well-</p>

<p>rounded individual. </p>

<pre><code>The music of the 1980s, sounding most excellent of course, has also inspired me
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<p>by tackling pressing life issues such as oppression, loss, love, and hate, while at the same </p>

<p>time conveying feelings of remorse, joy, and unity. Poison’s Nothin’ but a Good Time </p>

<p>addresses the average American’s stressful work day and tells us that its ok to relax and </p>

<p>have a good time when we need it. Twisted Sister’s Were not Gonna Take it acts as a </p>

<p>modern reinforcement of Locke’s social contract and advises us to take action against </p>

<p>oppressive authorities that infringe on our right to rock. REO Speedwagon’s Ridin’ the </p>

<p>Storm Out, parallels modern weather catastrophes like hurricane Katrina and invokes a </p>

<p>feeling of hope and determination to make it through.</p>

<pre><code>I have also been inspired by the wholesome family television of the 1980’s. Who
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<p>can forget the handsome face of a young Scott Baio playing Charles in Charles in </p>

<p>Charge? In the show, Charles juggles college with being a nanny for a family in need. </p>

<p>He is not only successful in his schoolwork, but he positively shapes the lives of himself </p>

<p>and those around him. There was also the enlightening sit-com, Full House, which </p>

<p>demonstrated the average family’s everyday problems and the best solutions for them </p>

<p>(with the added benefit of Bob Saget’s hilarious comedy). The popular </p>

<p>program, Saved by the Bell, gave us a look at everyday high school problems and </p>

<p>provided insight in to solving these issues through forgiveness, cooperation, and a good </p>

<p>attitude. </p>

<pre><code>Although it often seems cheesy and washed up, we can all learn a valuable lesson
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<p>from the media of the 80’s. Whether it be how to manage a house full of kids, or how to </p>

<p>survive in college, 1980’s media can be our guide to success. We just have to remember: </p>

<p>Every Rose has its Thorn. </p>

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<li>lol this essay got me into pepperdine</li>
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