Critique My Essay (rough draft)

Applying to College
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<p>PM me for it, and please PM me back about with whatever feedback you have thanks!</p>

<p>The topic was, Indicate a Person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.</p>

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<p>Bump! 72398</p>

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<p>i’ll do it! my friends have told me i’m a very good writer (I’ve been published a few times)</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to look at it, but I’m a bit busy, so I can’t make any promises.</p>

<p>Where are you applying? Send it on over.</p>

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<p>Applying to Caltech, MIT, Brown, Stanford, Harvard, Rice, Harvey Mudd, Univ of Miami, and Georgia Tech.</p>

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<p>Send it over.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll do it. It’s better than mandatory alcohol education online.</p>

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<p>I’ll do it.</p>

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<p>I’ll critique yours if you critique mine. PM me if you’re up for it.</p>

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<p>I’ll PM you guys in a couple days when I have a new draft made.</p>