Critique My Essay

<p>Hello! I have an essay and I would like to know if anyone is willing to critique it.</p>

<p>Just wondering if anyone is out there. My essay includes birds, which should be reason enough to critique it! ;)</p>

<p>Just another bump before this gets lost on the dreaded second page. I guess this will be my last bump, since third time is the charm (hopefully).</p>

<p>I can take a look if necessary</p>

<p>I can take a look, will you look at mine as well?</p>

<p>I can read it. Please PM prompt and school(s) as well.</p>

<p>I can read it… PM it</p>

<p>PM it over,
I can help edit it!</p>