Critique my essay?

<p>This essay wasn’t written for any particular prompt, and it’s about 500 words too much on the limit for the general Common App essay. I just wanted to get people’s opinions if I was going in the general right direction with a practice essay; you could say that this is a prompt for why I’m interested in pursuing the major I’m pursuing (film studies) without having any actual experience or prior background in this area. </p>

<p>PM me and I’ll send it to you. </p>

<p>(P.S. I’m a transfer student)</p>

<p>bump!</p>

<p>sure ill read it</p>

<p>Ill read it</p>