<p>Post your email address. Thanks. :)</p>
<p>h88 @ hall88 . com</p>
<p>I’d love to critique yours. You might also want to PM me instead.</p>
<p>Ahh I changed my mind, I’m going to revise it first. Expect an email in a week. :)</p>
<p><a href="mailto:cresaitch@yahoo.com…wont">cresaitch@yahoo.com…wont</a> mind… waitng for a week… 
cant get hold of big books…cos i love reading articles and essays…</p>
<p>sent (10 char limit)</p>
<p><a href="mailto:pink_heaven012■■■■■■.com">pink_heaven012■■■■■■.com</a></p>
<p>Got it 
Will reply soon!</p>
<p><a href="mailto:cauchyineq@yahoo.com">cauchyineq@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>yay for some winter reading.</p>
<p>Will give you a detailed reply soon…but currently what i see is a lck of connection between your dreams and your community/experience…and between it what is the role/place of mIT…
just adding a sentence or so at the end of each paragraph and modifying a the last paragraph can change it dramatically…bring the spark of MIT in your Essay…i hope i will reply within a day :)</p>
<p>Your points are all right…just the link is missing…Good Luck!</p>