critique my ivy league personal statement!!!!!!

College Essays
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<p>who wants to critique my personal statement??</p>

<p>topic: “describe someone who has had an influence on you and describe that influence”</p>

<p>thanks!!!</p>

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<p>i’ll be happy to critique</p>

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<p>I’d be glad to offer feedback</p>

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<p>i’ll read yours if you read mine [the one i sent wasn’t correct]&lt;/p>

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<p>sent!!! bump please</p>

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<p>bump pleaaaaaase help!</p>

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<p>i will gladly read yours if you’ll read mine (short answer) (=</p>

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<p>if u pm me it i will pm u mine no ivies only, lacs =)</p>

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<p>i dont wouldnt mind critiquing. pm it</p>

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<p>Please pm me!!!</p>

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<p>thanks guys! didnt send to anivick sorry not experienced enough.</p>

<p>please bump need BRUTALLY HONEST feedback!</p>

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<p>i’ll take look if you want</p>

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<p>pm me, i’ll read it</p>