Critique my short essay! (#8)

Colleges & Universities Stanford University
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<p>If you’re interested, let me know or PM me. Thanks!</p>

<p>Please be BRUTALLY HONEST in your opinions.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it! PM me!</p>

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<p>sureeeeeeee</p>

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<p>ooh you live in alaska. shweet. i’ll read it for you =)</p>

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<p>I’ll return the favor. :)</p>

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<p>haha i’ll read it too~</p>

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<p>ill read it pm me</p>

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<p>thanks guys I love you all… uhh not in a man to man sort of way, but rather in a man to woman sort of way.</p>

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<p>I’ll look at it if u r still up for it</p>

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<p>i’ll check it outt</p>

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<p>send it me :)</p>