Critique my Speech Competition Entry!

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<p>:) For a $40,000 scholarship.</p>

<p>Yes, I know, apply next year >:P
But yah, here’s my entry. I’m getting
ready for the next round and re-shooting
my video, so pour down the rain of
criticism!!!</p>

<p>I’ll enjoy it :wink: I’m a masohonist like that
hahahah.</p>

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<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>there were a couple of moments where the hand gestures were a bit too much, and were waaaaay overused, but you sounded good.</p>