<p>Hey there… I just typed up my first UC essay, and I was wondering if anybody could read it and give me advice.
Be warned… I wrote it in a few hours, so it’s horrible!! ( In my opinion )</p>
<p>Anyone? Please?</p>
<p>Oh yeah… I’ll PM it to you.</p>
<p>if you want to swap, id love to! </p>
<p>send me an email with yours and ill send you mine: connor.shinn(-at)comcast(dot)net</p>
<p>Sure! Mine’s <a href="mailto:mainmolina@aol.com">mainmolina@aol.com</a></p>
<p>i can edit it today.</p>
<p>Sure PM me.</p>