<p>Hey! </p>
<p>So I just finished writing my personal statement and was hoping I could get some people to help me revise it. It’s on the first prompt (Describe the world you come from–for example, your family, community or school–and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.). Please be honest in critiquing my essay. I want to make my it the best it could possibly be. </p>
<p>Let me know if you want to read it and I’ll PM it to you. Thank you!</p>
<p>i’ll be glad to read it. email me Danielkwon444@ aol . com</p>
<p>I could read it too:)
Email me at <a href="mailto:vanilla_z18@ymail.com">vanilla_z18@ymail.com</a></p>
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<p>ill be glad to read it my email is <a href="mailto:santana1305@live.com">santana1305@live.com</a> or you can pm me if you can</p>
<p>email to me andres.garcia_1 @ y a h o o .com ive been editing my friends and they like my feedback</p>
<p>Yeah sure pm me!!</p>
<p>Sure, copy and paste it in a PM and send it to me.</p>