Critique on Common App Short Answer Needed

College Essays
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<p>I wrote about volunteer work for my extracurricular short answer, and i’m at 1,2008 characters, so I need some criticism on what to cut out. </p>

<p>If you want to read it, feel free to post here and then I can PM you my essay. Thank you!!!</p>

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<p>12,008 or 1,208? or 1200?</p>

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<p>Haha oops. Typo. I meant 1,208. Sure roydeep, no problem. PM it over.</p>

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<p>Well I was unaware I couldn’t PM cause I have under 15 posts. :frowning: Nevermind</p>

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<p>send it over</p>

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<p>PM me. I a working professional who have helped students on college essays.</p>