<p>can someone critique my personal statement essay please? hopefully in the next day or so, because i have to submit it on the 31st. thanks!</p>
<p>I’ll look at it and get back to you today. PM.</p>
<p>bump…</p>
<p>I’d love to see it.</p>
<p>Sure, I can look at it now and give you a quick reply.</p>
<p>sure i’ll edit it right now</p>