Critique the essay of how I avoided getting mugged

<p>Just say if you would like to in the comments and I will PM.</p>

<p>I would really appreciate it if you gave some criticism or advice on the essay. I'm not doing this to entertain you guys. Thanks.</p>

<p>That's a weird topic! I'll do it.</p>

<p>I don't have anything to do at this hour (lol) I'll help</p>