Critiques on my caltech essay, please?? Honesty and harshness is appreciated!

<p>Let me know if you can look over it...thank you :-)</p>

<p>I'll look it over! I'm a senior too, but don't worry-- wouldn't dream of applying to CalTech, haha, severe lack of math skills :P pm me if you want.</p>

<p>I'd be happy to help! just pm me</p>