Dear Roomate essay

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>I can read it if u want, PM me!</p>

<p>i'll read it PM me.</p>

<p>ill take a look xD</p>

<p>PM me! I'll gladly read it!</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>ill review it and critizie it for you. PM me :D</p>

<p>can i read it plz?</p>

<p>I'd love to me</p>

<p>pm me, I'd love to help</p>

<p>* I have already submitted the essay under SCEA. Thank you for offering your help. *</p>

<p>I was wondering how you phrased the beginning of your essay. Did you use "Dear prospective roommate."? Also, what were yours about.</p>

<p>* I was anachronistic and begun my essay with a fictional name of my future roommate as in the essay I have already recieved my acceptance letter.*</p>

<p>I didn't even write a letter. I just started talking about an experience I had and hoped it would show my roommate the type of person I am. I got that idea from a Stanford senior. She sent me her essays along with her brother's and they both got in so I'm hoping mine will be good enough.</p>

<p>Would you mind sending them to me? I've been trying to craft a good essay (with only a couple of days to go). I finished all other essays/responses, but I'm stuck on this one. </p>

<p>you can email me at adnan(dot)esmail(at)</p>

<p>sure thing!! PM or email me.</p>

<p>pm me, i want to read.</p>

<p>Count me in.</p>

<p>sure..PM me</p>

<p>i could help you send it over</p>