Dear Roomate essay

<p>I have two roomate essays. I was hoping someone could read them and tell me which one they think is better.</p>

<p>pm me.. i'd be glad to critique</p>

<p>I'd be glad to help! I had the same dilemma. PM me.</p>

<p>sure. a pleasure</p>

<p>i'll comment</p>

<p>i'll critique it, just PM me</p>

<p>I'll critique it.</p>

<p>sure, i'll take a look at it</p>

<p>PM me i'm a good critic :0</p>

<p>ill read too</p>

<p>sure i'll give you critique</p>

<p>send me yo</p>

<p>I'll look at them</p>

<p>send me yo essay ... i will give a hella* good critique</p>

<li>nor cal slang</li>

<p>i'll look at them</p>

<p>with glee, i will</p>

<p>PM me. I promise to not steal anything (I'm not even sure I'm applying!)</p>

<p>ill comment pm me</p>

<p>i'll read it :)</p>

<p>I would like to read.</p>