<p>Chances for:
UC Berkeley
UC LA
UC Irvine
UC Davis</p>
<p>Applied for:
Pre-Business/Undeclared at Berk
Pre-Econ/Pre-Business Admin at LA
Business Info Management at Irvine
Sociology at Davis</p>
<p>My story:
GPA jumped from a 2.9 Sophomore year to a 4.2 Junior year. I briefly mentioned the passing of my grandpa during sophomore year (didn’t want to go into detail) and the ending of my first relationship as a few of my hardships during my rough sophomore year. I also mentioned how I became stronger as a person and now know how to respond when I encounter similar events in the future. I also mentioned how I started a business to distract myself from negative emotions, and began to love business and commerce.</p>
<p>Personal Statements:
1: World I come from…
I talked about a boy whom I teach martial arts to who has autism. I talked about how his determination in his training motivated me to be just as determined etc etc… not the strongest essay, but still solid.</p>
<p>2: Personal quality etcetc…
I talked about the business I started, juggling between junior year and all the administrative duties, being recognized by my city’s Rotary Club, landing an internship+job at a Real Estate firm, attending a prestigious business camp taught by a Haas School of Business professor, receiving a full scholarship from the Rotary Club etcetc… basically, this is where I tried to shine. I feel this is a pretty good essay. Opinions vary though.</p>
<p>Stats:
High SChool: Public
GPA 3.401 Weighted No Cap
GPA 3.310 Weighted UC Cap
GPA 3.000 Unweighted</p>
<p>SAT (1710)
Math 620
Reading 560
Writing 530</p>
<p>ACT (26)
E- 23
M- 32
R- 23
S- 24</p>
<p>AP/H classes taken (6 Courses, 12 Semesters)
AP World Hist/AP Biology/Ap US Hist./AP Statistics/H Pre Calculus/ H English III</p>
<p>Senior Year load: (3 APs, 1 H)
AP Literature/AP American Gov/AP Calculus AB/H Physics/Spanish 3</p>
<p>Work Experience:</p>
<p>Martial Arts Academy Junior Instructor
April 2008- present</p>
<p>Realty World Regency INTERNSHIP
June 2011- August 2011</p>
<p>Realty World Regency Marketing Analyst Position
August 2011- present</p>
<p>Apparel Business Owner- Founder and CEO/Manager
July 2009- present
*Raised monthly revenue from 2k to 4k. Over 1000 clients. International. One person business.</p>
<p>Titan Template Newspaper
2009-present
-Staff writer and layout editor</p>
<p>Adidas Footwear and Apparel- Model
Summer of 2009</p>
<p>Extracurricular:
2011 Camp Venture Business Retreat (June 2011)
2010 Interact Club’s District Conference (Dec 2010)
Martial Arts- advanced student(2003-present)
Badminton Team- team captain and varsity player (2006-present)
Piano/music theory- student (2001-present)
Chamber Choir- Base Section Leader (2009-present)
High School Musical Production- singer (April 2010)
Interact Club- member (2008-present)
Chinese Club- member (2010-present)
Environmental Club- member (2011-present)</p>
<p>Awards:
Best Written Business Start-Up proposal award</p>
<p>Hercules’s Rotary Scholarship</p>
<p>2010 18th Annual University of California Berkeley Regional Chinese Martial Arts Tournament
-Intermediate Male Traditional Southern Fist
Gold Medalist</p>
<p>-Intermediate Male Traditional Northern Fist
Silver Medalist</p>
<p>2011 19th Annual University of California Berkeley Regional Chinese Martial Arts Tournament
-Intermediate Male Traditional Southern Fist
Gold Medalist</p>
<p>-Intermediate Male Traditional Northern Fist
Bronze Medalist</p>
<p>-Intermediate Male Traditional Long Weapon
Outstanding performance recognition</p>
<p>2010 San Francisco International Chinese Martial Arts Competition (ICMAC)
-Advanced Male Traditional Southern Long Fist
Outstanding performance recognition</p>
<p>-Advanced Male Traditional Northern Long Fist
Outstanding performance recognition</p>
<p>2011 San Francisco International Chinese Martial Arts Competition (ICMAC)
-Advanced Male Traditional Southern Long Fist
Outstanding performance recognition</p>
<p>-Advanced Male Traditional Northern Long Fist
Outstanding performance recognition</p>
<p>Best written Business Start Up Plan (Camp Venture 2011)</p>
<p>Seventh Place Badminton League Tournament 2011
-North Coast Championship qualified</p>
<p>Languages:
English Fluent/Cantonese Fluent/Mandarin Fluent/Spanish Limited Ability</p>
<p>Community Service- Plenty. About 200-300 hours.</p>