Dec. Writing Section (abe lincoln essay & correct passage w/ books turned to movies)

<p>This is the one wiht only two writing sections
i know there’s like four tests circulating out there</p>

<p>so how many no errors did u guys get?</p>

<p>I think 3. Im pretty sure i got them all right</p>

<p>was the last one no error?</p>

<p>i didn’t get an abe lincoln essay. my essay was on optimism. but i did get a correct passage on books into movies.</p>

<p>i got 5 no errors on id errors, including one about bonsai.</p>

<p>ahh yeah i remember that ^</p>

<p>i think another no E is about marriage and hot air ballons or something</p>

<p>Yea bonsai is no error</p>

<p>does anyone remember the other NEs?</p>

<p>the last one was about shocker prices or something, i put “but also” which was i think the letter D. (and i had d before that too i think)</p>

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<p>do you remember the question?</p>

<p>yo i got no errors on</p>

<p>bonsai
the wedding … (such places as)
the tea from dutch and china?</p>

<p>tehre was one more i forgot, but i got 4 errors</p>

<p>can someone confirm this??</p>

<p>Oh yea i remember, it was somethign like, today, weddings are held in hot air balloons, blah, and blah.</p>

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<p>hmm i got 5 NEs… mighta missed one then, but yea i remember the 3 you list</p>

<p>i remember there were a few NEs right in the beginning</p>

<p>i had somewhere between 4-6 no errors can’t remember lol</p>

<p>How about the sentence improvement. I think it was number 11 on the 25 minute one. It was about angry employees threatening to strike. I eliminated it down to two choices, and guessed B, which was they were angry and so threatened to strike, or something. But the other one was angry and threated to strike (it had an infinitive in it). So which was the answer?</p>

<p>there was one about the bird turning her eggs to keep htem warm, i chose E for that…</p>

<p>oh yea i remeber now… yea i had a hard time with the employees striking. chose B at the end too.
yea i think the bird one was also NE.</p>

<p>so for NEs we have:
bird + eggs
bonsai
mariage in hot air balloon
tea</p>

<p>any more?</p>

<p>i thought the bird one was a sentence correction</p>

<p>really? i dun really remember</p>