desperate for essay help

<p>could any1 please look at my essay. I personally think it sucks, but also think the idea has potential, so please help me out!
PM or respond.</p>

<p>Sounds really interesting.
PM me!</p>

<p>any1 else?</p>

<p>Help is on the way, Mathwiz :)</p>

<p>Go ahead and PM me your essay and I’ll give you some constructive feedback.</p>

<p>thx so much</p>

<p>i will help you, just PM it over.</p>