<p>Hey all,</p>
<p>I’m writing about my disciplinary violation, and it’s turning out to sound more like a short story one would read in a book, as my style of telling my anecdotes often ends up being. It’s also ending up a bit long at one full page single-spaced. I’m wondering if I ought to shorten it down and remove more of the descriptions and stick to the bare bones of the story, even though it may sacrifice my point of view? Or better yet, if anyone would like to read it, I would be glad to have them run it over via PM.</p>
<p>Regards,
Romanian</p>
<p>EDIT: Would it be okay to include swears, if they are quotes, or ought I do censor them with asterisks?</p>