<p>planning on applying through common app to BC, Penn, Duke, Northwestern, Vanderbilt, maybe Princeton and a couple other schools.
1500+/2200+ SATS, top 1% in class, heavily involved in community work, debate, politics & have local, state, nat’l awards for them.</p>
<p>now i’m aiming for a strong essay to not give admissions official a reason to reject me.</p>
<p>Help is very much appreciated, as I can’t tell if the essay really exhibits me. i think it’s a good story, but i donno overall.</p>
<p>Thanks =]</p>