Do I have what it takes for the Ivies?

College Essays
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<p>My SATs and grades are in the right range to get into Brown and Columbia (my two top choice schools), but I know I need my essays to set me apart. </p>

<p>Will anyone please give me a second opinion on my essay and let me know what they think?</p>

2

<p>I would like to read the essay if thats fine with you!</p>

3

<p>Okay I’ll PM you humblefool. </p>

4

<p>I’ll take a look at your essay if you still want more feedback. </p>