Does anyone want to compare two essays and tell me which is better?

College Essays
1

<p>They’re both common app and topic of choice.</p>

2

<p>Unless its a Princeton or Dartmouth essay I’ll read it. If it is Princeton or Dartmouth I’d still be willing to read it but I am applying there, so send at your own discretion.</p>

3

<p>yep I’ll read :)</p>

4

<p>anyone else? preferably older than '10 graduates. thanks!</p>

5

<p>ah, just need one more reader to settle the matter!</p>