Does my personal statement convey who I am?

Colleges & Universities Columbia University
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<p>I’ve spent about 4 weeks, drafting, revising, and such. I’m looking for only 3-4 readers preferably people who:</p>

<p>1) Are current students atColumbia
2) Are alumni
3) Are not 2014ers
4) Have been on this site for a while (at least 50+ posts)</p>

<p>Would anyone care to help me? The reason for my criteria is because i want to minimize the chances of someone taking my essay. I had been careless when i sent out 12 copies of my 1st draft to be proofread. Some still haven’t responded so I’m a little worried about that.</p>

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<p>by the way… i’m not saying that you have to fit all the criteria. One or two will suffice.</p>