<p>“Would you please visit this establishment?”</p>
<p>I see nothing wrong with it…?</p>
<p>sounds OK to me , given an appropriate context.</p>
<p>yeah, it all depends on what context the sentence is used in.</p>
<p>Is it supposed to cuz I don’t see anything wrong.</p>
<p>Nothing wrong…was there supposed to be?</p>
<p>should it be: “will you please visit this establishment.” If not, then i don’t see anything wrong with it.</p>
<p>4 expressing a polite request : would you pour the wine, please?</p>
<p>3 expressing a request : will you stop here, please.</p>
<p>Both forms are correct.</p>