Does this essay have potential?

College Essays
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<p>I’m doing prompt 1 for the Common App and my essay is not a story with a setting or particular time. It’s an essay about myself. </p>

<p>I wrote it quickly, so it’s a very rough draft. I want to know if it has potential before I work on it. Anyone want to read it?</p>

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<p>I saw your other thread, and i’d be happy to read it and give some general feedback.</p>

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<p>Thanks! I was at a complete standstill so I just wrote whatever came to mind.</p>

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<p>I can help too.</p>

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<p>i will read it for you.</p>