Does this sound arrogant????

College Essays
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<p>In my supplement my closing sentences for two paragraphs go as following:</p>

<p>Unlike the markets, I can predict that my uptrend of finance and fine arts at Penn would reach new highs each consecutive year.</p>

<p>Unlike most fund managers, I can assure that my downtrend of entrepreneurship at Penn would “profit” the University and me together.</p>

<p>Does this come off as arrogant, I don’t mean them to, I am just trying to be a little witty, but fear that some adcom will think I am a stuck up arrogant SOB and then reject me.
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<p>They come off as unsupported statements- you can neither predict nor assure what you claim to. The risk isn’t coming off as…arrogant. But, something else.</p>