<p>i was thinking of writing about helping others and how that has affected my dreams and aspirations. i plan to use examples such as volunteering at the hospital, trying to help my cousins who are in financial problems, etc. i plan to wrap it into how this world has shaped my dreams and aspirations to become a doctor. do u think itll work?</p>
<p>It works, if you know how to write it actively.</p>
<p>Just make sure to fit in “helping your cousins who are in financial problems” with wanting to be a doctor. You dont want random stuff in there that’s irrelevant to your essay. I’m sure you’re trying to show that you’re into helping others out but make sure to make a tie between the two, that would help.</p>