Don't know what to add to my UPenn essay

College Essays
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<p>I have about ~360 words for my UPenn essay, but the minimum word count is 400. Can someone read mine and make suggestions? I’ll read any of your essays in return.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>i’d like to read it.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>^You don’t have 15 posts so I can’t PM you</p>