Doubts about college essay

<p>Ok, so I’m a senior which means that I can’t change my essays now. I guess thats a good and bad thing. But I was looking over my one essay and all of a sudden I started getting second thoughts about it. So would anybody be so kind as to read it over for me and tell me what they think?</p>

<p>most def… if you’ll give me your impression of mine?</p>

<p>I’ll read it for you! I’ll give real but kind feedback, I promise!</p>