Draft Number One Thousand two hundred and eighteen

<p>Or just draft number six. (But it does feel like the billionth one, though)</p>

<p>Would anyone feel like reading and commenting? The essay is almost completely different from what I’ve started with (if you have read my previous ones.) Being way brutal with it? (09’s are welcome)</p>

<p>But now the problem is melodrama-tism…</p>