<p>This is my first ever-essay thread so I decided to smart small, this is just my “what my activity means to me essay.” I wrote it at two in the morning last night, and thought, hmmm…this isn’t terrible. Wanted to know what you guys thought. Be as critical as you deem neccessary. </p>
<p>I would really appreciate any reviews, especially from already college students or parents here! thanks! </p>
<p>I am a junior, so you know.</p>
<p>I wrote my essay at 2 AM too. Sent it to all my colleges. I wonder what they thought about it. I wrote about an experience I had that night with my friend and how it made me think back to the time I saved a man’s life who had a stroke. I hope they like it.</p>
<p>Wow. Mine isn’t nearly that dramatic, haha…although I like to think I wrote it dramatically.</p>
<p>Sure, email me at <a href="mailto:RayAllen333@gmail.com">RayAllen333@gmail.com</a> with college confidential as subject please. Good luck!</p>
<p>thanks! anyone else?</p>
<p>the title is A Journey Beyond the Abyss</p>
<p>The title sounds pretty sophiscated, I want to take a look.</p>
<p>seems like a cool essay.</p>
<p>can i check it out?</p>
<p>email me at <a href="mailto:kungpao.yangzhao@gmail.com">kungpao.yangzhao@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>this has been a pretty contoversial essay. Some of you have said its been great and poetic, others have said that it needs to be re-worked or scrapped. Anyone else have any input?</p>
<p>I personally like it…but then again its my essay.</p>
<p>sure, <a href="mailto:sushant269@gmail.com">sushant269@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>Sure, can you send it to me? I would like a read-through.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>I’d love to check it out for you. PM me if you like.</p>