edit my essay on combining two cultures?

College Essays
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<p>Hello, </p>

<p>I wrote my essay on being bilingual and the challenges that came with it - it’s about 850 words long. Could anyone give me some feedback? Especially, would it be improved if I cut it back a bit?</p>

<p>Thanks - leave a comment and I’ll PM you.</p>

<p>Also, NOT class of 2014 only, please…</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I can help, PM me!</p>

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<p>PM with title/prompt.</p>

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<p>Send it on over. I’d like to help. =)</p>

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<p>I’ll help, send it over</p>

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<p>you can PM me (:</p>