<p>can you guys please give me feedback and tell me how to make it flow more and how to be more mature in it. it would really be a big help thanks!!</p>
<p>Have you ever wanted to try something new everyday? One word: Wawa. It is the best store that a teenage boy can ask for. Living in Northern Jersey I do not have the honor of having a Wawa near me. Unfortunately I only have a 7-11. To an outsider Wawa is comparable to 7-11, however, that is false. Wawa is a 7-11 on steroids. It literally has everything you could image which is amazing for me because I enjoy trying new things all the time.
The best thing that Wawa has to offer me is its fresh food bar. After coming off burnt from the beach, everything on that touch screen order menu looks appetizing. From its warm snacks and sizzling soups to its classic hoagies, everything is astonishing. People can see me in this store everyday, and after going a multitude of times; I can see myself within their foods.
A morning breakfast muffin is comparable to me. I too am a warm and comforting person. My personality allows me to sit with a person and listen to them in order to always make them feel accepted. In addition, like the protective wrapper along the muffins base, I too have a guard round me at all times. However, when I think that the right moment is at hand, I often let down my guard and open up.
Another item that Wawa has to offer is the fresh lunchtime hoagie. Although I cannot speak for me tasting fresh, I can lament the fact that I look fresh all the time. I never have a hair out of place and even go to the bathroom during the schooldays to checkup on how I am looking. Although to some, that may be odd due to the fact that I go to an all boys school, however, what people think rarely effects the person that I am.<br>
Like a saucy meatball hoagie, I too am ballsy. I would consider myself a bold individual who is always trying to stick out in a crowd. One of my personal vexations includes blending in with the crowd. While my friends were playing videogames on weekends during freshman year, I was out creating a raking and shoveling business.<br>
A steamy chicken noodle soup for dinner is something that I can relate to. Like the noodles I too am flexible and versatile. Whenever there is a conflict, I am usually the first person willing to compromise. In addition, if there are too many people involved in one activity, I will be the person to switch activities just so that everything works out. I despise seeing a plan not workout because of someones stubbornness.
For a delectable desert, Wawa offers delicious enjoyable fruit smoothies. Similar to the smoothies, I am a likeable individual. I often do not hang out with one group of friends, but rather I spend time with everyone at school. As a rising senior my classmates elected me to the position of senior class president. Although I am likeable like a fruit smoothie, I am in no way a fruity.
Wawa and I are very relatable. We both have plenty to offer and relish trying new things. While Wawa tries new recipes and I try new challenges, I think that we are very alike. I know that I will never change and will always be diverse in college. In fact, I will probably be the kid that will be pushing for a Wawa wherever I land up.</p>