EMERGENCY!! Is my essay appropriate?

<p>I’m not sure if my essay is appropriate for the topic (the computers are useless one). I also need to cut about 125 words. And I don’t think the essay is even that good. Any willing readers? Please? If you read/comment on mine, I’ll read/comment on yours, if you’d like.</p>

<p>Less than one week…</p>

<p>:eek: :eek: :eek:</p>

<p>i can read it</p>

<p>I can read too.</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>i did mine on that too send itover</p>

<p>ya. no prob, i’lll read it</p>

<p>I sent it to tarau2, but fae, I can’t send it to you until you clear out your inbox. I guess I’ll try again later?</p>

<p>ill read it, submitted my app yday…relief i tell u</p>

<p>ill read it.</p>

<p>i can read it</p>