<p>I’m a little nervous about my equality essay…I took a hard stance on the issue. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read it to tell me what they think of it. It’s kind of risky, since I wrote the essay as if I was addressing Professor Perry directly (I have read her books and have even corresponded with her) and refer to specific phenomena she refers to.</p>
<p>My English teacher (who used to work in college admissions) said that this essay is intentionally meant to be risky because they want to know the applicant’s core values. So I suppose I lay it out on the line.</p>
<p>I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read it and how others approached this essay, if they did at all.</p>
<p>Did you apply SCEA? I don’t know how helpful it would be for someone to read your essay at this point.</p>
<p>Nope. I didn’t. Which is why I’d love feedback haha</p>
<p>How about this: If I get in on Monday, I’ll read it for you.
I didn’t write my essay responding to the equality prompt, but I sent them a lot of my writing as an arts supplement and one of my top extracurriculars is being editor in chief of my school’s literary magazine. If I get in, we’ll know my writing/editing skills are up to Princeton’s standards. If not, I’m still willing to read it for you if you want, but I may not be the best pick.</p>
<p>Haha makes sense. Thanks man, I appreciate it! I’m not worried about grammar so much because I’m a professional editor. I’m just worried about the content because I’m taking a HUGE risk haha.</p>
<p>Personally, I like your essay idea! I hope it works out for you.</p>
<p>Thanks man! Would you like to read it?</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you want me to. PM me.</p>