Essay A help

Colleges & Universities Massachusetts Institute of Technology
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<p>I chose Essay A, which reads:</p>

<p>Tell us about an experience which, at the time, really felt like “the end of the world” – but had it not happened, you would not be who you are today. Describe the process through which you discovered value in the negative.</p>

<p>I wrote an essay, but I’m not sure if it’s relevant enough to the prompt. Would somebody be so kind as to read it and help me out here?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>i’ll give it a read too</p>

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<p>i’d love to help, pm me</p>

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<p>read it…</p>

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<p>pm me too :)</p>

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<p>Sorry if I couldn’t get you a copy in time. </p>

<p>I’ll post the part I’m most worried about. This is an excerpt from my essay with the End of the World connection. The essay is about how I had to use my sister’s pink bike to get a cool bike that all the kids at school had. Do you think this applies to the question?</p>

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<p>After this part I talk about being yourself etc. Do you all think the essay answers the question? That is my main concern and the only thing keeping me from submitting my application right now.</p>

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<p>seems fine to me.</p>