Essay check

<p>thank you. I was wondering if you would like to look over my essay. its not the final draft nor is it exactly what the final wil be about. just a general feel if you understand. i also wrote it under time constraint as part of the AVID end of year exam. You dont have to edit it or anything, i would just like your opinion on it and dont be afraid to be brutally honest! lol. well sen dme your info so i can pm it to you.</p>

<p>Sure. You can PM it over CC. :] And, I’ll definitely critique it for you!</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I will read it. :slight_smile: PM me</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it. PM me.</p>

<p>ill read it =D</p>