Essay Critique for common app short answer!

<p>Simple as that. Want some opinions/insight/advice.</p>

<p>I’m doing early decision/action for a few schools as well so the sooner the better.</p>

<p>It’s 1000 characters exactly atm, but I’ll change things up if you guys believe it would be better for it.</p>

<p>I’ll take everything you guys say into consideration. Muchas Gracias :)</p>

<p>You can PM it to me.</p>

<p>I also need a critique for my short answer; would you like to trade? PM me.</p>