<p>Please PM me if you would like to be an AMAZING person and read and critique my first draft of my essay.
I am just looking for a way to put more voice in it and any advice possible that could make my essay better.
THANK YOU SO MUCH, I will critique essays as well if you would like in return!!</p>
<p>Please do not think I am dumb for this essay, this is just a BASIC first draft and all harsh critique and improvement is welcomed</p>
<p>please someone PM me and offer to critique mine…</p>
<p>I’ll try to help, PM it over!</p>
<p>Send it here too!</p>
<p>PM me too!</p>