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<p>Welcome to the sparkling lights’ city, LAS VEGAS! Even though Las Vegas has problems in violence in alcohol, it is more entertaining than Kuwait because it has worldwide shows, and a thrilling night life.
As we discuss the violence in alcohol, Las Vegas is known for the excessive alcoholic drinking habits. Whereas in Kuwait, alcohol is prohibited due to religious situations. Many tourists visit Las Vegas to drink and have fun, but sometimes they overdose in alcohol. Alcohol overdosing will make them drunk which leads them to become inconsiderate in the way they act and speak. On the other hand, because alcohol is banned in Kuwait, it is more desired by some people. Therefore they end up by smuggling in alcohol illegally, and worry about the consequences. As everyone knows, Las Vegas is famous for three things, eat, play, and drink. It is legal to drink alcohol in Las Vegas in any place at any time. Although, in Kuwait, it is against the law in respect to the Islamic country. So if anyone needs to drink in their daily diet, it is better to visit Las Vegas, than to visit Kuwait.
When it comes to entertainment, Las Vegas has the best worldwide shows, with the most popular comedians, singers, actors, and magicians. Las Vegas’ shows are international and people all around the world visit Las Vegas to attend the shows and meet some Hollywood stars. In contrast, Kuwait’s shows are narrow, local, and cheaper than Las Vegas’ shows. The audience that attend Kuwaiti shows are mostly from Kuwait. Even though Las Vegas’ shows are more expensive than Kuwait shows, they present the shows with a good facilitated stages and sound systems. They have the best, well organized, and most crowded stages in the world! While Kuwait’s shows are really small, unorganized, and it has a cheap facility organization. Due to the small number of tourists and actors in Kuwait, organizers are careless in organizing the shows with high quality stages and sound systems. Due to this lack of anxiety in organization, I recommend visiting Las Vegas for attending the shows and having fun instead of visiting the unorganized shows in Kuwait.
Alternatively, entertainment in Las Vegas is all day long and becomes alive at night. It is well known for its night life, and this is where the excitement begins! The atmosphere of Las Vegas including the neon lights that glow up the streets, makes it an admirable atmosphere for the crowd. Whereas in Kuwait, entertainment is mostly during the day and ends at night. Unfortunately, Kuwait’s atmosphere is not always ready for entertainment. Entertainment in Kuwait is organized in certain occasions when it’s time for citizens and tourists to celebrate. In addition, Kuwait’s harsh and dusty nine months weather, makes it hard for entertainment and celebrations. However, when it comes to Las Vegas, night gambling at the casinos is known as the world’s free living. Night clubs fill the streets and hotels of Las Vegas, and all visitors look forward to join these parties for having fun.
In conclusion, if people want to entertain themselves with the freedom of drinking, partying and gambling at night, Las Vegas is more entertaining than Kuwait. Entertainment of Las Vegas covers up the negative side of the alcoholic overdose violence. However, if tourists wanted a quiet and less entertainment place, they should visit Kuwait instead. Finally, what happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas!</p>