<p>I started writing my second required Yale essay today, and I was wondering if anyone would want to read it and give me some commentary. Unfortunately, I am rather paranoid of sending something as personal as an essay because of cheating involved but I know it’s not good so if anyone has a spare moment, please PM me reply to this thread.</p>
<p>if you want i will</p>
<p>Just FYI, jenjen9ny is going to be a sophomore in HS.</p>
<p>yoshi, pm me and i’ll read it</p>
<p>I’m going to be a freshman there this year. PM me and I’ll give you feedback.</p>
<p>yoshi, pm me and I will read it.</p>