Essay for Stanford, too risky?

College Essays
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<p>I think my essay may come off as disrespectful or irreverent. Could someone please review it for me?</p>

2

<p>well now i wanna know what it’s about… so yes.</p>

3

<p>got my curiosity too. u can pm it to me</p>

4

<p>ill look as well</p>

5

<p>Yeah you can PM it to me too.</p>

6

<p>I’d love to take a look!</p>

7

<p>me toooooo</p>

8

<p>send por favor!</p>

9

<p>^uh guys… the deadline has already passed</p>