<p>[Personal</a> Statement - Business Schools - Pursuing the dream](<a href=“http://www.essayforum.com/undergraduate-admission-2/personal-statement-business-schools-pursuing-dream-18151/]Personal”>http://www.essayforum.com/undergraduate-admission-2/personal-statement-business-schools-pursuing-dream-18151/)</p>
<p>This would probably be better under the College Essays Forums here on CC</p>