Essay Help for a Mediocre Writer?

<p>Would anyone be willing to edit my essay? I’m trying to get into a couple private institutions because I really need the financial aid they offer.</p>

<p>Also, for some reason, my account is malfunctioning and I can’t send any private messages, only recieve them. So if you wouldn’t mind editing my essay, please pm me your e-mail. </p>

<p>Thank you guys so much. I appreciate it more than you’ll ever understand–especially since I’m a bit shy to show this to my teachers and classmates due to how personal my topic is. </p>

<p>Again, Thank you thank you thank you thank you</p>