Essay help needed

<p>one of my colleges asks for an essay:
Tell us, in detail, about an intellectual experience that has mattered to you. </p>

<p>i want to write about my AP psychology class</p>

<p>anyone wanna help me start off?
wat do i BEGIN with?
how?
thanks</p>

<p>well, what is it about your psych class that has mattered to you intellectually? start with an outline, just answering the question as if you were talking to a friend, and then add pretty sounding words in the middle and you have an essay lol</p>

<p>how do u know ur hot?</p>

<p>I would start with a cool quote/event from you AP psych class that would set up the rest of your essay or grab the reader's interest.</p>

<p>Example:
"Everyone is insane - at least according to my psychology teacher. This unexpected statement set the tone for the rest of the year in my AP psychology class where my eyes were opened to a wide range of issues and...etc. etc."</p>

<p>but, of course, better than that^</p>

<p>In general, these boards are fairly serious. I think you'd do better if you chose a subject line and a name that didn't sound like you were advertising for phone sex. If you want serious answers, it's a good idea to state your concerns in a serious manner.</p>

<p>i assumed he meant "I'm hot" in that he's upset or mad. Ghetto language here people. Haven't you guys popped in a rap CD anytime in the last 5 years?</p>

<p>-Penn '07</p>

<p>Whatever he or she meant, the vagueness doesn't bode well for being able to write an essay that will lead to an admission. And certainly the name the OP chose for herself/himself makes it hard for the person to be taken seriously on these boards.</p>

<p>No Im pretty sure she was referring to her physical appearance.</p>

<p>I agree with Northstarmom. </p>

<p>Besides all the time you have used up to post this same question on numerous forums could have been spent brainstorming ideas for your essay. </p>

<p>Susan</p>